- Chosen by Voters It looks pretty good to me. However, I would recommend that you throw in some community service things if you have any. Even if they were just one time things. Also, do you have any experience in leadership roles of any kind? Maybe include something in there. Do you have any experience in any kind of team? did you play a sport? worked on a team project?good luck with the joband good luck at smc Source(s): President, Brien Private Finance LLC 3 years ago 100% 1 Vote